I am doing my research paper on how sharks around the world are being targeted just to be cut a part for their fins, and thrown back into the ocean to wait for their death by predators. I believe that the most challenging part of this paper will be finding a way to show the reader what can be done. I know that you can say to end the killing of sharks, but there are many other reasons that sharks are killed and it is more necessary for that. Even with the laws today that are to prevent to many sharks to be killed they are broken everyday and there isnt much people do or much that can be done. The most enjoyable part of this paper for me is that i have always been an ocean lover for my entire life. I started scuba diving when I was ten years old and i have a great love for the ocean. When I see the sharks being killed for such a small thing like a fin, it is something that i feel i need to change. I will enjoy this because i like to learn more about things that are occurring in the ocean and causing many problems for the life under the sea. It was helpful to me to hear my peers feelings on my paper because it showed me a lot of what the reader of my paper will feel. I usually just write about things in my paper and will see that it does make sense to me, but not always to my ready. They showed me that i need to look at the bigger picture. I need to explain why this subject means so much to me and how it affects me. They presented to me different views to look at on the subject and how to show the reader a more interesting paper that everyone would enjoy. Also views that i need to hit so the whole paper makes more sense and i hit all the correct sides.